IceFire
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Registered: Jul 2000
Location: The Cold Northland!
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"When the DESTROYERS came for us they attacked, never had we been defeated. They were like the others strange, hideous, resisting, fighting only these were not like the others they did not die. We made our first retreat, we could forgo one system we left it for the DESTROYERS and went else where, but soon they followed, they hunted us, they followed us when we retreated, discovered were we lived. For a long time we did not now why they chased us, they were no ordinary enemy, they did not seek our territory, our technology, our resources. Now we know or crime was sin."
Thats a little better. This is what you did:
Hides = Hideous
Use = you meant 'us'
And I believe you got the entire first sentence backwards so I fixed it from memory.
All of that aside, were not kicking you off the board for having bad spelling or for having a long signature, but its VERY difficult to answer your questions and consider your opinions when your gramatical and spelling errors are so frequent as they are. Take some time and try and fix your mistakes. The signature should be only a line or two long and certainly not a whole monologue.
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