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Hello guys !
Here is my newest pic. Any comments ??????

http://www.nic.fi/~spusa/kuvat/wwc/Whitestar_patrol_in_Clark's_Trap.jpg

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I think thats your best yet. I suggest running Photoshop over the thruster flares and bluring the edges. The contrast between the thruster and the stuff infront of it (from camera) is distracting. Otherwise amazing!

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It's okay, but few of those shadows look kinda of odd... like they wouldn't even be related to this picture.

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hmm i must be blind because all i can see is Omega X's no shadows in sight

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it took me a while to work out what those black things were.. it looks like someone's been drawing on the picture with a marker pen.. get rid of those harsh black artifacts and it'll be AMAZING.

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Man, those Omega X's look really demonic. Nice job on them.

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I'm not talking about THE SHADOWS -- I'm talking about shadow effects... Those Thunderbolts look kinda odd you know... On downright and topleft...

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yah they do look odd thats because the lights are too intence and from different sides

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my only criticism is the thunderbolts. im not sure how but the thruster flare just seems odd to me and also if u look carefully u notice that the thunderbolts seem to be about the same size as the whitestars (thats most obvious in the bottom right).

Apart from that its great, i love the motion bluring.

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The picture looks awesome except for black parts of ion contrail suppression tines (yes thats their proper name)

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If you're using Lightwave, just select the T-bolt flares lights, go to the flare properties and turn off "Glow Behind objects"
That way the flare wont cut through the fins.
Its a still image and the flares aren't actually behind anything, so that isnt necessary.

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Originally posted by ApaBaBooN
I'm not talking about THE SHADOWS -- I'm talking about shadow effects... Those Thunderbolts look kinda odd you know... On downright and topleft...

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Originally posted by Big_Bopper
my only criticism is the thunderbolts. im not sure how but the thruster flare just seems odd to me and also if u look carefully u notice that the thunderbolts seem to be about the same size as the whitestars (thats most obvious in the bottom right).

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Looking good, as usual

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DAmn, i wish i cud do stuff half as good as that!

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did you model those yourself??????? damn your good

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