Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
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The Excalibur takes out some agression on a Drakh Cruiser.
Yeah, I know, its massive....

Excalibur mesh by Thomas Banner, converted by Craig A Clark, dont know who did the Drakh Cruiser, no readme with the mesh, no idea where I get it from.

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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
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The Excalibur takes out some agression on a Drakh Cruiser.
Yeah, I know, its massive....

Excalibur mesh by Thomas Banner, converted by Craig A Clark, dont know who did the Drakh Cruiser, no readme with the mesh, no idea where I get it from.

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Registered: Jun 2001
Location: England
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If you want constructive criticism then read on.. otherwise close your eyes

- too much ambient light, and I'd reposition the light so that we can see some dark shadows.

- I don't like the planet's texture.. either get something higher res or reposition it.

- the beams look a bit too "solid", while the flares are a bit small and dim.

- I think it needs nebulas.

- considering repositioning the camer so that the composition isn't balanced too much to the left.

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Location: England
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If you want constructive criticism then read on.. otherwise close your eyes

- too much ambient light, and I'd reposition the light so that we can see some dark shadows.

- I don't like the planet's texture.. either get something higher res or reposition it.

- the beams look a bit too "solid", while the flares are a bit small and dim.

- I think it needs nebulas.

- considering repositioning the camer so that the composition isn't balanced too much to the left.

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Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Nottingham, England
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I agree with all of those points except the one about the nebulas. To keep a good balance you could just chop off most of the right hand side of the picture.

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Registered: Dec 2001
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Or stick some fighters over there.
Something to balance the image, and to keep your eye from drifting out of the frame.

I got nailed for something similar in crit earlier this week.

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Or stick some fighters over there.
Something to balance the image, and to keep your eye from drifting out of the frame.

I got nailed for something similar in crit earlier this week.

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Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Estonia
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Althought not perfect, it still looks cool.

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Registered: Jan 2002
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Looks nice but there's one thing missing....the stars... Otherwise like Shark said not perfect but still cool.

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Looks nice but there's one thing missing....the stars... Otherwise like Shark said not perfect but still cool.

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