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I need feedback since i'm still a rookie at lightwave so what do you think....

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I need feedback since i'm still a rookie at lightwave so what do you think....

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It's good. But:

-Work on pulses more, WhiteStars fires green and purple pulses.
-Certain pulses points to wrong direction.
-I think you have a typo in the text, "Whe" or is it "Wbe"?.

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It's good. But:

-Work on pulses more, WhiteStars fires green and purple pulses.
-Certain pulses points to wrong direction.
-I think you have a typo in the text, "Whe" or is it "Wbe"?.

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It's been a while since I last watched B5 but those whitestar beams look a little wimpy to me. Apart from that it's pretty good work.

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It's been a while since I last watched B5 but those whitestar beams look a little wimpy to me. Apart from that it's pretty good work.

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I like that render, only thing bothers me on it is that typo...

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That looks pretty good and change it to "We"

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That looks pretty good and change it to "We"

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1. pulses- fire faster; greenish-white and purple.
2. jump point- way to big for not being a jump gate.
3. typo- we not whe.

other than that, it is great!

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1. pulses- fire faster; greenish-white and purple.
2. jump point- way to big for not being a jump gate.
3. typo- we not whe.

other than that, it is great!

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Love the ACTA style jump point!

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Love the ACTA style jump point!

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Great jump point effect, but I agree- too big.

I say take out the quote....its said too much (especially since Legend of the Rangers) and you could put something cooler in....and more than Marcus says it.

Good ships, re: weapons though.

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Great jump point effect, but I agree- too big.

I say take out the quote....its said too much (especially since Legend of the Rangers) and you could put something cooler in....and more than Marcus says it.

Good ships, re: weapons though.

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shhh alex is making a name for himself in tha render sotciety

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shhh alex is making a name for himself in tha render sotciety

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hehe....i just wanna learn from the more expirienced guys

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Umm.. That's too big jumppoint imo and that typo is diturbing the force.

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Umm.. That's too big jumppoint imo and that typo is diturbing the force.

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