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Red Faction: Parker Preview Adendum
Posted by WildWolf:
MikeB of Volition posted this:
Sigh. We had included a lead-in paragraph to introduce the reader to what he or she was about to read, to give some context to the information. IGN didn't print that and instead went with an intro paragraph of their own devising, which managed to contain three factual errors in two brief sentences. To correct the errors, make the following mental adjustments:
1) Parker is not a military recruit
2) The material doesn't tell you how he becomes involved with Eos.
3) Eos is not necessarily a group.
When I'm at work tomorrow, I'll post the intro paragraph we sent them, which should help explain the material better. In a few days, the story will be up permanently on our site. Nate'll have it in a nicer presentation, which'll make it more readable.
Bang! I'll post that preview paragraph after Mike does tomorrow too! BANG (exclamation point)
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08-02-2000 05:56 AM
