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I've been working on a campaign for some time now, and now I've found it may not be relevant to finish it, since a lot of excellent campaigns, such as Derelict for instance, has been released.

It is a quite short campaign, with 12 missions (13 in fact), but I wonder if people are still interested in new campaigns. Let me introduce briefly the storyline.

-It takes place just before the GTVA collapses the Capella node. The player is part of a small convoy, late on schedule, looking for a way to reach the capella system in time. To do so, the convoy is cutting its way through an uncharted jump node, and while flying to Capella, discovers a abandonned Shivan freighter. The leading officer decides to take it with them.

There is many events in the campaign, despite its short lifetime, and missions such as an extreme dogfight sequence in a REALLY dense asteroid belt, or a spying mission, a real one, where discretion and tactic are the best option.

I believe the storyline to be the best point in this, with some surprises and suspense, since I like working in that aspect.

Quite some time ago, I posted the first mission on the VBB, that was called "Inner troubles". The feedback was enthusiastic at this time, and I wonder if it would be the same now.

SO.

If I post what I've done so far in the download section of the FSWatch site, is there any chance to get some feedback?

Thanks for your attention.

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Feedback

I've been working on a campaign for some time now, and now I've found it may not be relevant to finish it, since a lot of excellent campaigns, such as Derelict for instance, has been released.

It is a quite short campaign, with 12 missions (13 in fact), but I wonder if people are still interested in new campaigns. Let me introduce briefly the storyline.

-It takes place just before the GTVA collapses the Capella node. The player is part of a small convoy, late on schedule, looking for a way to reach the capella system in time. To do so, the convoy is cutting its way through an uncharted jump node, and while flying to Capella, discovers a abandonned Shivan freighter. The leading officer decides to take it with them.

There is many events in the campaign, despite its short lifetime, and missions such as an extreme dogfight sequence in a REALLY dense asteroid belt, or a spying mission, a real one, where discretion and tactic are the best option.

I believe the storyline to be the best point in this, with some surprises and suspense, since I like working in that aspect.

Quite some time ago, I posted the first mission on the VBB, that was called "Inner troubles". The feedback was enthusiastic at this time, and I wonder if it would be the same now.

SO.

If I post what I've done so far in the download section of the FSWatch site, is there any chance to get some feedback?

Thanks for your attention.

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Hey there is always room for a good campaign in our hearts! Just finish it and release it in the VW archives.

And don't care if it has "only" 12 mission...I rather play 12 good mission instead of 70 bad ones...

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Hey there is always room for a good campaign in our hearts! Just finish it and release it in the VW archives.

And don't care if it has "only" 12 mission...I rather play 12 good mission instead of 70 bad ones...

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"Something is rotten in the state of Denmark..."

HAMLET RULEZ!!

I wouldn`t consider 12 missions as "Only"
And new campaign is always welcome.

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I wouldn`t consider 12 missions as "Only"
And new campaign is always welcome.

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Lasciate ogni speranza... Dante Alighieri
I`m not the king of your minds...

A well written 12 mission campaign is quite a bit of work. Finish it off. The missions sound interesting. As long as the plotline connecting them is as well I`d be happy to play it.

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